February 2011
1 post
Poem- NEED FEEDBACK
At The Carnival
The horses gallop
Up and down they go
Around and around
The bright lights,
The glimpse of smiles,
catch the eyes of spectators.
The ride fills the atmosphere
with sparkling faces and dazzle,
like the jewels on a crown
Effervescent,
Only a memory of a child
Can you tell what I am trying to depict?